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Jayashree

Jayashree — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Fariha, that was beautiful..

Fariha Jamil

Fariha Jamil — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Thank u very much Jayashree :)

Abdula Rahim

Abdula Rahim — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Wonderful expressions !!!

Fariha Jamil

Fariha Jamil — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Thanks a bunch Abdula :)

Dr.Ratan Saini

Dr.Ratan Saini — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

I know only people like you can create such beautiful stories.

Looking forward to read more from You.

Fariha Jamil

Fariha Jamil — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Dr. Ratan, its not a story but a simple ’overflow of overpowering emotions’ to put it in strict definition of literature....lol

Dr.Ratan Saini

Dr.Ratan Saini — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

You are very emotional person !!!

I like that description.

Fariha Jamil

Fariha Jamil — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

This is the definition of a poem by some critic of English literature, not my words :)

Desh

Desh — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

It’s William Wordsworth from The Preface to the Lyrical Ballads. Think you forgot to add ’recollected in tranquility’.

Anyways, it was a really nice reading. It’s a great blend of verse and prose, thoroughly impressed.

Fariha Jamil

Fariha Jamil — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

o wow! Yes Desh, i just remember recollections of early childhood....

Thanks man! :)

Ramesh Balam

Ramesh Balam — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Mujhe tum yaad aate ho.

Kahin jab door parbat per

kiran koi fisalti hai,

mujhe tum yaad aate ho.

Kabhi nasoor bankar tum

mere dil me kasakte ho,

mujhe parwah nahi lekin,

ghataon ki gali me jab

kabhi badli sisakti hai,

mujhe tum yaad aate ho.

Mujhe kuch ghum nahi hota

hai teri bewafai ka,

mujhe tau iski aadat hai,

magar amraion me door

jab koel kuhukti hai.

mujhe tum yaad aate ho.

Jo jalke mur gaye hote

tumhe hum kuch nahi kehte,

bhala kehne ko tha bhi kya?

Magar Sajkar jab kisi

dulhan ki doli nikalti hai,

mujhe tum yaad aate ho.

Fariha Jamil

Fariha Jamil — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

O my God! Ramesh, did u rite this?

If yes, please give me your autograph pls ;)

Ramesh Balam

Ramesh Balam — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Chatkilee chandni chun ke aati to hogi,

Khwabo se tumko jagati to hogi,

Angdaion ke waste utthe jo bahen teri,

”Balam” ki yaad tujhko satati to hogi.

—–

Tere dar pe gira tau utha loge kya?

Pehloo me apne jagah doge kya?

Aagosh me tere jo maut aa jaye,

Aanchal ko Kafan bana doge kya?

Fariha Jamil

Fariha Jamil — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Wah wah wah...

Arz kiya hai...

Raat youn dil mae tere khoe hue see yad aee,

jaisey veerany mein chupke say bahar a jaey

jaisey sehra mein holay say chalay baad- e-naseem

jaisey beemar ko bay wajha qarar a jaey...

Desh

Desh — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Mousamon se haalaat badal jaate hain,

Ehsaas, dil ke jazbaat badal jaate hain.

Naam kiska koi kyon kar yaad rakhe,

Waqt ke saath khayaalaat badal jaate hain.

Humaein fikr har pal ke wo rooth na jaaen,

Fir bhi woh kyon bebaat badal jaate hain.

Fariha Jamil

Fariha Jamil — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

I dont beleive this! u guys are so good at Urdu! Wonderful.. arz kiya hai..

Youn he mausam ke ada dekh kar yaad aya,

Kis qader jald badal jatey hein insaan janaa

Desh

Desh — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Ik junnon sa ishq youn hua apna,

Jee raha tha har roz, jo tha sapna,

Par kab ye khushiyaan jahaan ko raas aati hai;

Har shakhs badlaa, fiza badli, badlaa mausam.

Connect it with the last one.

Desh

Desh — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Jab rubaroo hue zindagi se hum,

Naagawaar guzraa, iska har sitam,

Kab jazba, khayaalaat badal ye paaegi;

Ik roz hoga hum par bhi, iska kuchh karam.

Still more to come.........

Desh

Desh — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Humsafar saath tha, raaste kho gaye,

Hum jab fir mile, ajnabi ho gaye,

Ye zindagi, dil, jahaan, sabab gham ka hai;

Sabse dosti chahi, ban gaye dushman.

Ravinder Makhaik

Ravinder Makhaik — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Great poetry guys,

Urdu happens to be the language in which God’s converse.

Fariha Jamil

Fariha Jamil — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Ap bhe kuch Irshad farmaiay...

Jayashree

Jayashree — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Is it all poets in here?! I so wish but there is no way I could join, I couldn’t rhyme even if my life was on the line.

@Ramesh Balam ’Mujhe tum yaad aate ho’ is an awesome piece!

Abhishek Asthana

Abhishek Asthana — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Aptly put Fariha.

You said, perhaps, all that is to be said but is mostly unsaid in relationships broken or otherwise.

And sorry I haven’t gone through the above poetry yet...will surely do that soon.

:)